My English 9 students and I wrote, for our first entry into poetry, versions of Clint Smith’s poem “Something You Should Know” (something else you should know is that you should read Smith’s poem). With their permission, I have provided some of the student work below.
Something You Should Know—James
Is that as a kid, I made a lot of jokes.
I talked the talk, I Seldom Stuffed the sock.
Anything from your mother to that’s what she said, I talked and talked
But in the quiet I learned,
Without the talk I’ve got no “walk”
Without the jokes I’ve got no “folks”
Which left me worried for the Curtains back,
To obsess over punchlines and sit in the dark, hoping like hell
that I’d have a hoot to hurl or a pun to present. That is why, even now,
I can need so Entirely to make you laugh, and why even now,
I am afraid to see myself in the silence of the spotlight,
Without a joke to tell, or a laugh to share, Exposed, In this silence.
Something You Should Know – MJ
Is that as a kid, I was happy.
I colored pictures
of animals like lions, dogs,
pandas, and elephants.
I watched cartoons that continued
to amaze me even after seeing them a thousand times.
Which left me dumbfounded by the thought that I had
to grow up, to be mature, to go to school,
to dress myself, to be a big kid.
Perhaps that is when I realized
that I couldn’t be a kid forever. Perhaps
that is why, even now, I can want so desperately
to be a kid again, because I’m afraid
of growing up, exposed, in the adult world.
Something You Should Know–Elisha
Is that as a kid, I was a tech intern.
I fixed Chromebooks
of students like middle schoolers, freshmen,
juniors, and seniors.
I watched students continue
to crush their Chromebooks, crack their computer
screens, then complain about them.
Which left me upset at the students,
to intentionally break their computers that way, reflecting their attitude.
Perhaps that is when I became so quick to judge people. Perhaps
that is why, even now, I can need to desperately
let things go, but am more afraid
of meeting myself, exposed, in His judgment.
Something You Should Know—Sophia
Is that as a kid, I wanted to be a paleontologist.
I dug for dinosaurs
From the Jurassic, Devonian, Cretaceous,
Mesozoic, and Cambrian periods
I watched as my hands continued
To pry objects from the ground, deftly dusting dirt from them
Examining the possible fossils,
Which left me disappointed when they were only rocks,
Ordinary pieces of earth that had never been full of life
And had never walked the ground that I now walk.
Perhaps that is when I first became wary of trusting.
Perhaps that is why, even now, I can want something
With all my being, but barely let myself hope
For fear of being let down.
Left vulnerable and exposed,
Wallowing in my own disappointment.
something you should know—Macy S.
is that as a kid I always wondered about the future
I imagined
where I would be
what I would be doing
where I would be going
the past always gets me
which leaves me worried about the present
to be worryless
about what’s in front of me
worryful of what if
perhaps I should look
at what is in front of me
perhaps let go of worrying about the past and future
that is why, even now, I try to forget
and live in the exposed now version of me
Something You Should Know—Aubrie
Is that as a kid, I played with my siblings.
I dressed the dolls
Of different varieties, baby dolls, Barbies, American Girls,
and Polly Pockets.
I watched my brothers continue
to run, jump, play, and pretend they were plummeting
to from a peak and pretend all again.
Which left me sad that I couldn’t play,
and upset I was alone for a few days.
To need my siblings there by my side.
Perhaps that is why they became my best friends.
Perhaps that is why, even now, I need them so desperately,
but am more afraid of meeting myself, exposed, without them.
Something You Should Know—Kennedy
is that as a kid, I decided to play basketball.
I didn’t understand the rules
of the game because I didn’t play any sports like volleyball, softball,
soccer, or track
I watched the coach as he continued
to explain things like how to dribble, pass, and
how to make a layup by hitting the corner of the box on the backboard,
which left me so scared because I didn’t think I could do it,
to get the ball that high, to even get it into the net seemed impossible
to live her entire life trying to succeed at one easy task
to feel good enough. Perhaps that is when I became a person who
tried to please everyone before my self. Perhaps
that is why, even now, I can want so desperately
to make sure everyone’s happy, but am more afraid
of caring about myself, exposed, in this world.
Something You Should Know—Macy T
Is that as a kid, I loved strawberry shortcake.
I smelled the hair
of the toys like strawberry shortcake, orange blossom,
lemon meringue, and plum puddin.
I watched the peculiar purple pieman of porcupine peak continue
to steal strawberries and watch strawberry shortcake
To eavesdrop on the information of Strawberryland.
Which left me concerned that he was going
to ruin their plans,
to take her strawberries for his own,
to feel evil. Perhaps that is when I become obsessed
with my strawberry shortcake pillowcase. Perhaps
that is why, even now, I can’t always trust people
even if they say they are on your side
of the fence, rejected, by their personality,
Exposed, in mine.
Something You Should Know—Emma K
is that as a kid, I wanted to play sports more than anything.
I watched games
that involved sports including basketball, volleyball,
softball, and dance.
I watched the majority of teams continue
to immensely improve and impressively win
with the help of multiple good plays and mistakes made by the opposing team.
Which left me sympathetic for the other teams,
who had to repeatedly find out what they did wrong,
and realize that they may be unable to fix their mistakes, to be
embarrassed. Perhaps this is why I’m constantly afraid
I’ll mess up and become embarrassed in front of my peers. Perhaps
this is why, even now, I can want so desperately
to fix my mistakes and continue trying, but am more afraid
of meeting myself, exposed, in front of my peers.
Something You Should Know—Bryton
Is that as a kid, I liked building with Legos.
I built models
of big things like houses, ships,
rockets, and airplanes.
I pretended to fly the airplane
across oceans, seas, continents, countries, and cities around
the world in search of new places.
Which left me in awe of exploration,
to fly around all free that way, to get
to live my entire life exploring the world
to feel joy. Perhaps that is when I became fond
of exploring the woods. Perhaps
that is why, even now, I can want so desperately
to stay inside all day, but will eventually
meet my previous self, exposed, in the smell of nature.
Thank you Mr. Polking and students of English 9. Very impressive and all unique and very creative! Keep writing- this is so good!
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Thank you! My students have found these imitation so helpful!
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